Have you ever had someone describe something to you that you could perfectly picture in your mind? That's what we should all strive to do with our writing. It should be detailed in a way that your reader has a clear vision of what you're discussing.
Pick some item and describe it with a few key phrases!
I'll start with what I'm having for breakfast, potato salad. (Yes, that really is what I'm eating for breakfast today!)
Potato salad: chunky potatoes, creamy mayo, small chive pieces, crunchy celery bits
With those descriptive phrases, can you picture (and almost taste) that in your mind?
Now you give it a try!
11 comments:
Radiant red strawberries, sweet pineapple pieces, peeled and thinly sliced kiwi, chuncks of ripe watermelon, fresh orange cantoloupe.
Yes! Fruit salad...
Lia Muth
Today my lunch was fresh salmon with a creamy sauce of mushrooms, sweet carrots pieces, juicy red tomato slices and crunchy green beans.
This was delicious!
Fernandez, Ana M
Today I ordered chopped steak with sliced ,freshly cooked well done red and green tomatoes with sauteed onions, with two slces of provolne cheese on a toasted roll.
Yum Yum.You got it A phillys Cheesesteak.
Angela Richardson
If you have evertasted a watermelon,it is probably no surprise to anybody why this juicy, refreshing fruit has this name, I will tell you why, because has a extremely high water content,giving its flesh a crumbly and subtly crunchy texture,and in that way it become to you in delicious comfort fruit.
January 27, 2010
Roxana Alvarez
Today, I missed breakfast, so I had a heavy lunch which consisted of jerk chicken, rice and peas, with tossed salad. I used a little ketchup to sweeten my taste bud. Wow, this was delicious!
Verona
First, I preheated the oven to 375 degrees. Next, I mixed dry ingredients such as: flour, some salt and baking powder. Then, I beat eggs and mixed it with butter, sugar, vanilla and milk. Last, I mixed everything together. I poured mixtue in a pan and put it in the oven for 30 minutes. Final result, my sons birthday cake.
Happy 9th Birthday!
Maria C. Torres
My appetizer for today consisted of a crispy romaine lettuce, bright orange carrots, green ripe cucumbers, baby cherry tomatoes, chunks of tender chicken breast, black olives, shredded cheddar and sharp cheese, and a rich, creamy A Thousand Islands dressing! A Delicious Healthy Chef's Salad of my liking!!
-Angel Guerrazzi
Rose - petals, fresh, red leaves, green, stalk
Deidra W.
My favorite breakfast is
two crunchy waffles(I put them in the toaster twice), two crunchy pieces of bacon with the rubbery edges for chewing on for a while, and a nice cup of hot peppermint tea with one spoonful of sugar and a touch of milk.... ahhhh Heaven!
My breakfast was small tuna chunks, creamy mayo, chopped oninions, fresh spinach lettuce, and sliced tomato in a warm warp with krisp french fries.
KelliB
Today I was spent!
I ran around the green, crisp grass at the quiet neighborhood park, while little squeals of delight resonated.We then sloppily ate fresh watermelon. Shortly after, one of us finally fell asleep on our stroll in the breeze, back home.
Today, I am so tired.
Mianta
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