Saturday, August 9, 2008

Writing - Personification

Many times in descriptive writing, you'll come across personification, especially if you're reading or writing poetry. Personification is giving human traits (qualities, feelings, action, or characteristics) to non-living objects (things, colors, qualities, or ideas).

For example, consider this sentence: The rain kissed my cheeks as it fell. It's impossible for rain to do an action such as "kiss" someone on the cheek. However, that paints and picture in the reader's mind!

Think of a non-living object and some human trait that you could use with it. Below are some examples of sentences that use personification.

The palm tree danced in the wind.
Her yellow polka dots screamed with their brightness.
The huge pumpkin sat in the middle of the field.

Visit this link (http://www.imschools.org/cms/Units/Poetry/student2.htm) and look at the 10 examples given. Then, come back here & post your favorite one!

14 comments:

Anonymous said...

The wind sang her mournful song through the falling leaves.







Sheila W.

Anonymous said...

The snow whispered as it fell to the ground during the early morning hours.

Michele T.

Anonymous said...

The strawberries seemed to sing,"Eat me frist!"

Suetto Chan

Anonymous said...

The wind sang her mournful song through the falling leaves.

wind - object being personified
sang - action is blew

The wind blew..

Anonymous said...

The video camera observed the whole scene.

Indira H.

Anonymous said...

The daffodils nodded their yellow heads at the walkers.

Anonymous said...

The snow whispered as it fell to the ground during the early morning hours.Kellie Butler

Anonymous said...

Writing-Personification

The aroma of the freshly baked peach cobbler danced around my tastbuds, and my mouth watered like a waterfall before I dared to take a bite.

-Angelica

Anonymous said...

The water beckoned invitingly to the hot swimmers.

Anonymous said...

His words were music to my ears.

Maria Rodriguez-Trelles

Anonymous said...

The rain kissed my cheeks as it fell.

Allison.

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